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Does your dog look like this?

Problem first: bald patches and dark skin up close, then side-by-side results at 30 and 60 days, then one jelly stick a day.

N304-1Alopecia XVideoSolutionAlopecia-LP127s · 9:16First spend Aug 1
Orders
11#5 of 379 ads · 4% of all orders
CPO
¥17,678account ¥22,530
Spend
¥194k50 days with spend
Conversion
3.7%orders ÷ page views · median 3.4%
Hook
21.1%3-sec views · median 21.3% · 9th of 16
Hold
3.7%ThruPlay · median 4.2%
CTR
0.98%link clicks · median 0.84%
CPM
¥5,743median ¥5,005
A question over the problem“DOES YOUR DOG LOOK LIKE THIS?” on a Pom with a bald patch
Second line in caps“BALD PATCHES THAT WON’T GROW BACK.” at 0:02
Framed clipsevery clip sits in a frame over a blurred backdrop

10 shots · female VO, 153 wpm, short lines (“That’s it. Dogs love it. Link below.”) · first word at 1.3s · side-by-side Before » After, 0:10–0:18 · product first at 0:19 · “One Japanese jelly stick a day” · ends on the 90-day guarantee

Where people leave share of impressions still watching · last 30 days

0%25%50%75%100%21.1% still watching at 3s8.6%4.5%2.2%1.1%HookProblemProofDailyOffer0:000:070:130:200:27
21.1%0:03 · “bald patches that won’t grow back”
8.6%0:07 · the dark skin
4.5%0:13 · 30 days, side by side
2.2%0:20 · one jelly stick a day
1.1%0:26 · 90-day guarantee

Where the clicks come from

Where they see it

2 of 7 orders came from Reels (29%) · all ads: 34%

Instagram Feed329%
Facebook Reels220%
Other13%
Instagram Stories19%

Orders Shopify could trace to a placement. Right-hand % = share for all ads. Small sample.

When they click

72 link clicks  ·  bars = people still watching

6130:07still watching3230:13still watching1560:20still watching810:27still watching

Can’t pin it down for this one: 613 people are still watching at 0:07 — plenty to produce the 72 clicks at any point in the video.

After the click
Sessions342
Add to cart144.1% of sessionsall ads 3.1%
Checkout964% of cartsall ads 62%
Bought51.5% of sessionsall ads 1.3%

Shopify sessions carrying this ad’s link. Meta credits 11 orders; Shopify can only trace the ones that came through the link.

Shot by shot frame + voiceover or on-screen text

0:00Hook

Does your dog look like this?

0:02Hook

Bald patches that won’t grow back.

0:04Problem

This is what it looks like.

0:06Problem

The bald patches, the dark skin

0:08Problem

the coat that just won’t come back

0:11Proof

This is what happened after 30 days

0:14Proof

60 days.

0:16Proof

These dogs got their coats back.

0:19Daily

One Japanese jelly stick a day.

0:22Daily

That’s it. Dogs love it.

0:25Offer

Link below. 90-day guarantee.

Week by week orders per week, Mon–Sun · green = CPO under the account average

3CPO ¥7.4kJul 272 days1CPO ¥52.4kAug 3¥52.4k spend2CPO ¥9.6kAug 10¥19.2k spend1CPO ¥34.4kAug 17¥34.4k spend3CPO ¥9.2kAug 24¥27.5k spend0no ordersAug 31¥21.8k spend1CPO ¥12.3kSep 7¥12.3k spend0no ordersSep 145 days0no ordersSep 211 day

What the numbers say

01

Problem first, 10 seconds of it

Bald patches, dark skin, a coat that won’t come back — before any result or product.

02

Short and plain

27 seconds, 64 words. “That’s it. Dogs love it. Link below.”

03

Clicks well

CTR 0.98% vs 0.84% median.

04

Small and lumpy

11 orders spread over 7 weeks; last spend Sep 23.

Same concept, other cuts

AdAngle · styleSpendOrdersCPOHook
N304-1AlopeciaX · Solution¥194k11¥17,67821.1%
N304-1Coat · BA¥0.7k0——
← 04V2004-106 →NV1002-4

Meta data from the HK hub, pulled 2026-09-28 · window Jul 31 – Sep 28 · medians = the 26 ads that spent ¥50k+; video medians = the 16 videos with 5k+ impressions · hook and hold are Meta’s 30-day video fields · voiceover transcribed from the file · original on Drive · full notes: Projects - Omega/Winning Ads Breakdown/N304-1/N304-1-breakdown.md